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Saturday 9 April 2011

mah first poem(n mah fav. one)BROKEN HEART

Today u have left me alone
has the love soured ,which u once shown ....


my life was blank  ,u made it shine
The day u added ur heart to mine.....


once ur love had made my face shine lyk sun in noon 
today ur absence has made it pale as winter moon....


Your love had changed me , i had found my heaven in you
How could you be so mean 2 giv ur heart to sum1 new.....


i jus cant distinguiush btwn real n reel
wenever those moments i feel ....


Today my heart aches 2 go back to d past
i can console mahself bt mah silly heart cant blv u r lost....


You were my heartthrob,you were my first love 
you were my life,you were my birdie dove .......


In dis journey of love she went on wagon and left me on cart 
perhaps i will have 2 always bear the grunt of  dis BROKEN HEART........



3 comments:

  1. nice job yaar!!!!!!!!!!!gud 1 rather fab 1 !!!!!post ur other poems n dat story also dude v r w8ing :)

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  2. amazing work..the lines are so very true and each word is touching the chords of heart...
    its just fantabulous....keep it up.... :)

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  3. thankzzzz prateek n chanpreet :):):)

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